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Wednesday, September 23, 2020

My Fairy Tale

 
 This is my fractured fairytale. It is not finished yet, I have been working on it in literacy. It is based on Goldilocks and the Three Bears combined with Little Red Riding Hood. Have you read these stories? Please give me some feedback in the comments. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Joseph I'm Taylor from Ahipara school. I thought this was a very creative piece of writing I really loved and enjoyed this post. AMAZING WORK!BLOG YA LATER.

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  2. Hi Joseph,
    I'm Dylan from Ahipara school
    Your story was really enjoyable to read it was VERY interesting
    anyway Great work on Your post
    Blog ya later

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