Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, September 23, 2020
My Fairy Tale
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Hi Joseph I'm Taylor from Ahipara school. I thought this was a very creative piece of writing I really loved and enjoyed this post. AMAZING WORK!BLOG YA LATER.
ReplyDeleteHi Joseph,
ReplyDeleteI'm Dylan from Ahipara school
Your story was really enjoyable to read it was VERY interesting
anyway Great work on Your post
Blog ya later