Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 9, 2021
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Hi Joe im Noah and i like your geyser drawing explodes but add more information about geysers please. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Joe, I really like your geyser drawing and I love that it has tons of details. But maybe next time you should write more on you blog to maybe explain your work and also maybe you make your titles a little bit more catchy. I learned about geysers last year, it was very cool to learn more about things like geysers. Do you like learning about geysers?
ReplyDeleteHi Joe im Macy I really like your drawing og your geyser, I like how it has lots of detail.Maybe next time you could write some facts about geysers like how they work. But I think it looks really cool. Do you know where you can find geysers in New Zealand?
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